Friday 10 October 2008

9th October


Overall I think this critique went really well as I didn't feel as I was under pressure because we were split into small groups. This made it easier for us to talk about each others work and give our advice or opinion. 

Things I should consider to improve my design
  • Make the strap line shorter
  • Make the vinyl more noticeable 
  • Put some colour in the image so it stands out 
  • Play around with the position of the type

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